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Tina’s Mother, by Mark Tulin – Friday Flash Fiction

Tina’s Mother, by Mark Tulin – Friday Flash Fiction
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Tina's Mother, by Mark Tulin
22/11/2019

Tina’s mother bought a helicopter so she could observe her daughter while at college. She circled the campus, observed Tina in her dorm room, and made sure she was attending all classes and wasn’t getting drunk at fraternity parties.

Tina’s mother felt better being able to closely monitor her daughter. She wanted to protect Tina from the evils of college life, and to prevent her from getting into trouble.

Tina felt suffocated and embarrassed by her mother's behaviors.

Despite Tina's pleas for more independence, the mother refused. She didn't want Tina to end up as a single parent like her.
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I am an author, poet, humorist, and short story writer living in Long Beach, California. I write about various topics, from my early childhood in Philadelphia to my years as a family therapist and finally to my soul-searching in California. These are poetic narratives that may have humorous or serious content or both. Either way, I hope my poetry and stories resonate with you. My books include Magical Yogis, Uncommon Love Stories, Awkward Grace, Junkyard Souls, and Rain on Cabrillo.

16 comments on “Tina’s Mother, by Mark Tulin – Friday Flash Fiction

  1. simplywendi's avatar

    🙂 I have a daughter leaving for college next fall………if I only had the money for a helicopter 🙂

  2. Liz Gauffreau's avatar

    I like the twist at the end that took the helicopter mother out the usual stereotype.

  3. Robert Parker's avatar

    A fun story, I like the twist also. maybe she could pick up some Uber fares, and drop off a few parcels for Amazon, to help defray the costs of the chopper

  4. tara caribou's avatar

    Ahhh yes, the helicopter-parent… forgetting to allow the kid(s) the chance to make mistakes (or succeed)…

  5. Theresa's avatar

    Good story. But I’m glad I was able to make the choices I wanted. It made me the person I am today.

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