I pull over on Cabrillo
to watch the rain
through my car window,
a blur of swaying palm trees
and cloud-burst windy skies,
an impression by chance,
an engraving on a wet afternoon
into a waterfall of glory.
Pouring rain is a haze of simplicity,
subdued and opulent,
channeling liquid energy
into one narrow moment
of youth and purity.
Previously published at The Local Train Magazine.
this is wonderful
Thank you, Andrew. 🙂
Really wonderful.
Thanks so much!!
Beautiful imagery; stunning.
Thanks, Tamara.
I love this poem Mark, there is something about the rain that I find so enjoyable……….the sound, the display of movement and I never thought about it until I read your poem, but I also tend to use this time to reflect.
Simply beautiful and peaceful!
Thank you, peaceful it is.