Poetry from Mark Tulin (Santa Barbara, California) and Diana Rosen (Los Angeles, California)
My Poem: The Fate of a Ringed Finger
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Poetry from Mark Tulin and Diana Rosen—Poetry Super Highway
Crow On The Wire 
Excellent.
Much thanks!!
I like the interplay of movie, fantasy, and real life in your poem.
Thanks, Liz.
Nice one. when I was younger that was a ‘dream’, ‘nightmare’ I often had. 😄
I’m assuming you outgrew it.
Yes and I’m glad I did.
Wow, Mark!! What an awesome post!!! Really Brilliant!! Your lines spotlight exactly what I wonder about – How two people madly in love end up divorced and often hating each other and using their children as pawns!!
Really loved your lines:
the spirit of a senseless marriage took over
by the fate of a ringed finger.
All our romantic expectations,
our hopes, and dreams,
our bright future together,
ending up in misery.
Love the title!!
Bravo Mark!!!
✨✨✨😊
Thanks, Chuck. Love and hate are closer to each other than we think.
Hey Mark, loved this poem
❤️❤️😊
As you enjoy writing poems, will you please enter my poetry competition,
https://penableme.wordpress.com/2020/03/05/poetry-thursday-competition/
Click on the link above…..
It’s a really great competition!!
I will certainly check it out. Thanks for the link. 🙂🙂
You’re welcome Mark 😊
Midnightlion, Do you have the link where I can submit the poem?
Hey Mark, sure just click here,
https://penableme.wordpress.com/2020/03/05/poetry-thursday-competition/
And scroll down, it will tell you how to enter 😊😊😊
Is it okay?
Yes, thanks.
Your welcome Mark ❤️
Sooo… Are you going to enter Mark?
I just did. Hope it went through.
Let me check…
I don’t think so… Did you do it ON the link in the comments section?
Nope I just checked my site, it is not in the comments section 🤔
Check now.
Alright
Nope. Here is the link again,
https://penableme.wordpress.com/2020/03/05/poetry-thursday-competition/
Scroll down on it until you reach the comments section.
Okay Mark, on that link, I left a message for you in the comments section, can you see it? Then message there please
Mark?
its definetly not there…….
How about now
Mark… are you on the right website….
Firstly… Have you seen the comments section?
Try again, in the comments section please. If it still doesn’t work then please give me the link in your reply. The link to your post with it
That’s okay. I’m good. I wish you all the best. Thank you.
Thanks Mark for trying, I don’t know WHY it doesn’t work… If you still want to enter just write your poem on your reply to this message! As I really want to read it🙏😊
ok.
https://crowonthewire.com/2020/03/05/a-california-street-by-mark-tulin-visitant/
A California Street
I had a vivid dream at nine,
living by the California coast,
walking down a wide street,
past palm trees and Spanish-style houses.
I marveled at the warmth of the sun,
the clearness of the turquoise sea
and how beautiful the birds-of-paradise were.
Then I woke from the dream
and walked a broken path to school
down a narrow, tree-less North Philly street
with brick homes and abandoned cars on either side.
The sky was cloudy.
The air was stale.
Only the faint breeze coming from the Delaware
reminded me of the Pacific.
My god Mark, AMAAAZINNGG!
Oh wow. Just super!
Thank you😘
Well done, Mark!
Thanks, Theresa.
Great post
Thank you, agoldmine