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The Fate of a Ringed Finger by Mark Tulin —Poetry Super Highway

Poetry from Mark Tulin (Santa Barbara, California)

My Poem: The Fate of a Ringed Finger
— Read on poetrysuperhighway.com/psh/poetry-from-mark-tulin-and-diana-rosen/

The Fate of a Ringed Finger by Mark Tulin


I sat in a dark movie theatre,
and watched with horror
as I proposed to my girlfriend,
blinded by a false reality
while my emotions spoke in tongues.

My mind set on marriage.
Only twenty-two at the time,
I thought I knew what I wanted
and didn’t realize how much we’d change.

I stood up and yelled at the screen,
Please think twice, or you’ll be sorry!
The moving picture didn’t answer;
the spirit of a senseless marriage took over
by the fate of a ringed finger.

All our romantic expectations,
our hopes, and dreams,
our bright future together,
ending up in misery.

I pleaded to myself to come to my senses.
Wake up, Snap out of it, Man!
I had lost control after I took the marriage vow.
The usher grabbed my arm, and reasoned—
It’s just a movie, sir.

The movie ended tragically, of course,
with a long, contested divorce.
Our possessions split up.
Our dream house sold,
and our children divided into thirds.
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I am an author, poet, humorist, and short story writer living in Long Beach, California. I write about various topics, from my early childhood in Philadelphia to my years as a family therapist and finally to my soul-searching in California. These are poetic narratives that may have humorous or serious content or both. Either way, I hope my poetry and stories resonate with you. My books include Magical Yogis, Uncommon Love Stories, Awkward Grace, Junkyard Souls, and Rain on Cabrillo.

40 comments on “The Fate of a Ringed Finger by Mark Tulin —Poetry Super Highway

  1. Ancient Skies's avatar

    Excellent.

  2. Liz Gauffreau's avatar

    I like the interplay of movie, fantasy, and real life in your poem.

  3. anne leueen's avatar

    Nice one. when I was younger that was a ‘dream’, ‘nightmare’ I often had. 😄

  4. thereluctantpoet's avatar

    Wow, Mark!! What an awesome post!!! Really Brilliant!! Your lines spotlight exactly what I wonder about – How two people madly in love end up divorced and often hating each other and using their children as pawns!!

    Really loved your lines:
    the spirit of a senseless marriage took over
    by the fate of a ringed finger.

    All our romantic expectations,
    our hopes, and dreams,
    our bright future together,
    ending up in misery.

    Love the title!!
    Bravo Mark!!!
    ✨✨✨😊

  5. Midnightlion's avatar

    Hey Mark, loved this poem
    ❤️❤️😊
    As you enjoy writing poems, will you please enter my poetry competition,
    https://penableme.wordpress.com/2020/03/05/poetry-thursday-competition/

    Click on the link above…..
    It’s a really great competition!!

  6. Midnightlion's avatar

    its definetly not there…….

    • Mark Tulin's avatar

      How about now

      • Midnightlion's avatar

        Mark… are you on the right website….

      • Midnightlion's avatar

        Firstly… Have you seen the comments section?

      • Midnightlion's avatar

        Try again, in the comments section please. If it still doesn’t work then please give me the link in your reply. The link to your post with it

      • Mark Tulin's avatar

        That’s okay. I’m good. I wish you all the best. Thank you.

      • Midnightlion's avatar

        Thanks Mark for trying, I don’t know WHY it doesn’t work… If you still want to enter just write your poem on your reply to this message! As I really want to read it🙏😊

      • Mark Tulin's avatar

        ok.

        https://crowonthewire.com/2020/03/05/a-california-street-by-mark-tulin-visitant/

        A California Street

        I had a vivid dream at nine,
        living by the California coast,
        walking down a wide street,
        past palm trees and Spanish-style houses.
        I marveled at the warmth of the sun,
        the clearness of the turquoise sea
        and how beautiful the birds-of-paradise were.

        Then I woke from the dream
        and walked a broken path to school
        down a narrow, tree-less North Philly street
        with brick homes and abandoned cars on either side.
        The sky was cloudy.
        The air was stale.
        Only the faint breeze coming from the Delaware
        reminded me of the Pacific.

      • Midnightlion's avatar

        My god Mark, AMAAAZINNGG!
        Oh wow. Just super!
        Thank you😘

  7. Theresa's avatar

    Well done, Mark!

  8. agoldmind's avatar

    Great post

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