I become a snowy egret on the beach, staring into the choppy, translucent sea, skinny legs swaying on each breaking wave, sinking deeper into quickening sand, snatching worms or insects as they fly, nature’s rippling tide, I ride…
— amethystmagazine.org/2019/07/08/snowy-egret-a-poem-by-mark-tulin/
Snowy Egret – a poem by Mark Tulin
I become a snowy egret on the beach,
staring into the choppy, translucent sea,
skinny legs swaying on each breaking wave,
sinking deeper into quickening sand,
snatching worms or insects as they fly,
nature’s rippling tide, I ride.
A brief and treacherous journey,
I participate in collectively.
A free and easy universe enabling me
in the water and the air I breathe.
With allies and predators alike,
I spend my life in the bittersweet swell.


Wonderful! I love the image of a “translucent sea.”
Thank you.
Wow, Mark. What a ride.
Thank you, Bojana
Welcome. Submit, submit, submit!
That is my manta.
Mantra
Very nice use of metaphor!
Thank you, Liz.
Nice imagery!
Thanks, PoeEternal
clever the way you inhabited the egret; I love the phrase ‘bittersweet swell’
Thanks, John.
So beautiful and musical! Thank you, Mark for a beautiful picture to my mind.
You’re welcome, Theresa.