I become a snowy egret on the beach, staring into the choppy, translucent sea, skinny legs swaying on each breaking wave, sinking deeper into quickening sand, snatching worms or insects as they fly, nature’s rippling tide, I ride…
— Read on amethystmagazine.org/2019/07/08/snowy-egret-a-poem-by-mark-tulin/
Wonderful! I love the image of a “translucent sea.”
Wow, Mark. What a ride.
Thank you, Bojana
Welcome. Submit, submit, submit!
That is my manta.
Very nice use of metaphor!
Thank you, Liz.
clever the way you inhabited the egret; I love the phrase ‘bittersweet swell’
So beautiful and musical! Thank you, Mark for a beautiful picture to my mind.
You’re welcome, Theresa.