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Poem: Honesty of Childhood by Mark Tulin

 

I miss the honesty of childhood.

The way my friends told me

the truth

in words, in play

or in crumpled notes.

I miss friends

who teased me

about my looks,

who said shut up,

blow your nose

and read a book.

Not like the adult world

of smiles, deception

and awkward stares.

Never saying what’s true,

never expressing

how they feel.

©️mark tulin

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I am an author, poet, humorist, and short story writer living in Long Beach, California. I write about various topics, from my early childhood in Philadelphia to my years as a family therapist and finally to my soul-searching in California. These are poetic narratives that may have humorous or serious content or both. Either way, I hope my poetry and stories resonate with you. My books include Magical Yogis, Uncommon Love Stories, Awkward Grace, Junkyard Souls, and Rain on Cabrillo.

22 comments on “Poem: Honesty of Childhood by Mark Tulin

  1. lovesdeepwaters's avatar

    Seriously! The kids I nanny can be brutally honest. It’s refreshing.

  2. ortensia's avatar

    We should never loose that β€œ kid attitude β€œ at least not completely.totally relate to this post and feel much better as sometimes honesty is condemned and criticized and so too many people tend to take themselves too seriously.
    P.s
    I have a very β€œfactual” husband……should make me feel blessedπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    • Mark Tulin's avatar

      When we were kids, we seemed to take criticism better. As an adult I find myself to be way too sensitive and defensive. πŸ™

      • ortensia's avatar

        I m the first one to laugh about myself but I can be very β€œtouchy”.hope we ll never clash dear ….all this sensitivity…..but naaaa we are too nice πŸ˜‰πŸ¦‡
        P.s
        They really should add a crow emoji ,so unfair😑

      • Mark Tulin's avatar

        The fact that I can talk about it means that I probably am not as sensitive as I think. 😊

      • ortensia's avatar

        I was thinking my just that😊

  3. GP Cox's avatar

    Kids have a straightforward way of looking at things and just don’t mind telling you their findings! πŸ™‚

  4. forresting365's avatar

    Right?!!!

  5. Pramodh Anand Iyer's avatar

    Yes, my friend. Childhood was blessedly authentic. May your inner-child always be. Well expressed! πŸ’«

  6. Pramodh Anand Iyer's avatar

    Gratitude for your patience! πŸ™πŸ’«

  7. Patti Moore Wilson, wednesdayschild2's avatar

    Oh simply lovely. And honest. Just like a child…

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