The Pirate’s Ship, by Mark Tulin – Friday Flash Fiction
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The Pirate's Ship, by Mark Tulin
9/10/2020
Amanda’s father took her to the amusement park last Saturday, and it was okay for a while. They went on all the rides, walked through the Fun House, and laughed when they got dizzy hanging upside down on the Pirate’s Ship. The nachos and cheese fries were good even though her tummy hurt and dad kept going to the bathroom. But Amanda wished that her father wouldn’t have lectured her on boys, or explained how important it was to get good grades in school. She hated when dad tried to teach her things in the middle of having fun.
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I clicked on your link, but it would not go thru. Maybe it’s on my end.
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Thanks, Kritika. 🙂
Pleasure 🙂