Poetry

Waltzing Steady by Mark Tulin

I listened to John Prine

the other day

and could hear the sound

of his heartbeat

singing.

 

He sang in a mid-western

drawl, slow and easy,

but waltzing steady

with a quirky rhythm

and a satirical rhyme.

 

His gravelly voice

spread across the universe

like a worn, comfortable blanket.

He tweaked my mood

and sharpened my soul

with each bend of his jaw.

 

I could see him writing songs

sitting on a porch,

a beer by his side

with his gentle fingers

strumming

his sweet goodbye.

 

 

 

 

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I am an author, poet, humorist, and short story writer living in Long Beach, California. I write about various topics, from my early childhood in Philadelphia to my years as a family therapist and finally to my soul-searching in California. These are poetic narratives that may have humorous or serious content or both. Either way, I hope my poetry and stories resonate with you. My books include Magical Yogis, Uncommon Love Stories, Awkward Grace, Junkyard Souls, and Rain on Cabrillo.

36 comments on “Waltzing Steady by Mark Tulin

  1. DanaR's avatar

    I was lucky enough to see John Prine in concert many years ago. His songs take me back to a better place. Great piece!!

    • Mark Tulin's avatar

      Thank you, Dana. I was a big fan and wanted to see him in LA but couldn’t make it. Tree of Forgiveness was beautiful.

  2. SnapDragon's avatar

    ‘could hear the sound of his heartbeat singing’ — This is beautiful.

  3. annhmy's avatar

    R.I.P. John Prine

  4. Dracul Van Helsing's avatar

    A fitting poetic tribute to a great artist and singer.

  5. Rivers Renewed's avatar

    A beautiful tribute.

  6. anne leueen's avatar

    This is a wonderful tribute to him.

  7. judeitakali's avatar

    Beautifully written poem, admirable choice of words 🌞

  8. Liz Gauffreau's avatar

    A fitting tribute to a great artist. I’m listening to “Lonesome Friends of Science” right now.

  9. grumpygorman's avatar

    Powerful, may I share it?

  10. Lucy's avatar

    Absolutely powerful and heartfelt. Very beautifully penned. Fantastic piece!

  11. larry trasciatti's avatar

    Sad. I recently heard his ‘When I Go To Heaven’. I hope he made it

  12. Piano girl's avatar

    Beautiful tribute.

  13. forresting365's avatar

    Oh WOW! I love this, Mark! Cheers! 🙂

  14. dweezer19's avatar

    This world grows a bit sadder with each loss..

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