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Coin Operated Car Wash, by Mark Tulin – Friday Flash Fiction

Coin Operated Car Wash, by Mark Tulin – Friday Flash Fiction
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Coin Operated Car Wash, by Mark Tulin
8/11/2019

Sundays, I washed my Mazda.

My car is white with black interior.

I rinsed it, then turned the dial to soap and gave it a good scrubbing.

As the timer counted down, I hurried to deposit more quarters.

I gave it a final power rinse, then wiped it with a rag.

I pulled out of the bay, vacuumed the interior, and dried the car under the sun.

My once dirty car was now clean. A thing of beauty. A miracle. As pure as a saint.

I knew it was temporary, but for a few days, at least, I felt complete.

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I am an author, poet, humorist, and short story writer living in Long Beach, California. I write about various topics, from my early childhood in Philadelphia to my years as a family therapist and finally to my soul-searching in California. These are poetic narratives that may have humorous or serious content or both. Either way, I hope my poetry and stories resonate with you. My books include Magical Yogis, Uncommon Love Stories, Awkward Grace, Junkyard Souls, and Rain on Cabrillo.

16 comments on “Coin Operated Car Wash, by Mark Tulin – Friday Flash Fiction

  1. simplywendi's avatar

    🙂 there is something so special about having a clean vehicle!

  2. Rosaliene Bacchus's avatar

    I get a similar feeling after cleaning our apartment 🙂

  3. Linda Raha's avatar

    Loved this! When we clean something up, we appreciate it again! It may not be the same as that ‘new car’ feeling, but it certainly comes close! Same thing goes for people; when we take care of ourselves, the drive is a whole lot smoother. 🙂

  4. Jay's avatar

    Ah, such satisfaction.

  5. thereluctantpoet's avatar

    Ahh, the small joys!! Great post!! 👍😊

  6. Theresa's avatar

    Cute! It’s a joy when a car is bright and shiny.

  7. indianeskitchen's avatar

    Every time I go to the car wash it rains. 🤣😂🤣😂🤣 Seriously last two times I was 5 minutes from home and there went my clean car.

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