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The Intruder, by Mark Tulin – Friday Flash Fiction

The Intruder, by Mark Tulin – Friday Flash Fiction
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A flash story about broken dreams.

The Intruder, by Mark Tulin
12/3/2019

My father’s piercing scream invaded my dream.

“Hey!” I heard him shout, “Get the hell outta here!”

Dad yelled at the top of his lungs from the living room where I found him pushing against the door. “Help me!” he cried. “Someone’s trying to break in!”

Soon we heard footsteps running down into the basement.

Mom called 911.

The burglar escaped through the back door.

The intruder invaded my dream that day, but years later he still lives in my head. Each night before retiring, I check the deadbolt locks twice on the front door, fearing that he might return.
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I am an author, poet, humorist, and short story writer living in Long Beach, California. I write about various topics, from my early childhood in Philadelphia to my years as a family therapist and finally to my soul-searching in California. These are poetic narratives that may have humorous or serious content or both. Either way, I hope my poetry and stories resonate with you. My books include Magical Yogis, Uncommon Love Stories, Awkward Grace, Junkyard Souls, and Rain on Cabrillo.

9 comments on “The Intruder, by Mark Tulin – Friday Flash Fiction

  1. ivor20's avatar

    A captivating story Mark…

  2. anne leueen's avatar

    The stuff of nightmares….

  3. tara caribou's avatar

    Yes, that invasion of privacy, the stealing of safety. That burglar definitely did not walk away empty-handed for with him he stole your peace and made you feel vulnerable.

  4. Ihagh G. T.'s avatar

    interesting, adventurous and captivating

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