Many thanks to The Loch Raven Review for first publishing this poem. Please visit their fine site. Featured image by Milton Tulin, edited by Mark Tulin.
Dad’s Coma by Mark Tulin My father is on his last breath, a crowd of friends and family huddle around, watching him go down death’s spiral, unable to wake up from a permanent dream His lungs move in and out like a wheezy accordion, his lips pop with each expulsion of breath Once I thought, he was invincible Now watching him, he could barely lift a finger Time has changed the most vibrant of our lives My memory of my father, soon to be an old photograph, stuck in a family album, deep in a closet of lost souls.


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Moving piece. 💙
This brought me back to watching my mom’s last moments – “his lips pop with each expulsion
of breath” – her lips did the exact same thing. Your words brought that sound back immediately. Very intense, Mark.
Wonderful.