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Poem: Dad’s Coma by Mark Tulin

Many thanks to The Loch Raven Review for first publishing this poem. Please visit their fine site. Featured image by Milton Tulin, edited by Mark Tulin.

Dad’s Coma
by Mark Tulin

My father is on his last breath,
a crowd of friends and family
huddle around,
watching him go down
death’s spiral,
unable to wake up
from a permanent dream

His lungs move in and out like
a wheezy accordion,
his lips pop with each expulsion
of breath

Once I thought,
he was invincible
Now watching him,
he could barely lift a finger

Time has changed
the most vibrant of our lives
My memory of my father,
soon to be an old photograph,
stuck in a family album,
deep in a closet of lost souls.

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I am an author, poet, humorist, and short story writer living in Long Beach, California. I write about various topics, from my early childhood in Philadelphia to my years as a family therapist and finally to my soul-searching in California. These are poetic narratives that may have humorous or serious content or both. Either way, I hope my poetry and stories resonate with you. My books include Magical Yogis, Uncommon Love Stories, Awkward Grace, Junkyard Souls, and Rain on Cabrillo.

4 comments on “Poem: Dad’s Coma by Mark Tulin

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  2. eob2's avatar

    Moving piece. 💙

  3. Susi Bocks's avatar

    This brought me back to watching my mom’s last moments – “his lips pop with each expulsion
    of breath” – her lips did the exact same thing. Your words brought that sound back immediately. Very intense, Mark.

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