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Longing, by Mark Tulin – Friday Flash Fiction

Longing, by Mark Tulin – Friday Flash Fiction
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Longing, by Mark Tulin
12/6/2020

Charles complained about how lonely he was. He pined for a girlfriend, someone who he could come home to after work. His friends had either been married or had girlfriends. He longed for someone, too.

He tried and tried. He went on dating sites, blind dates, socials, and tried to pick up girls at dance clubs. When he stopped looking, that’s when it happened. He met a young woman at a church bible study and instantly fell in love.

While Charles found his life partner, his friends were not pleased. They liked Charles better when he was miserable and single.
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I am an author, poet, humorist, and short story writer living in Long Beach, California. I write about various topics, from my early childhood in Philadelphia to my years as a family therapist and finally to my soul-searching in California. These are poetic narratives that may have humorous or serious content or both. Either way, I hope my poetry and stories resonate with you. My books include Magical Yogis, Uncommon Love Stories, Awkward Grace, Junkyard Souls, and Rain on Cabrillo.

19 comments on “Longing, by Mark Tulin – Friday Flash Fiction

  1. Kritika Maheshwari's avatar

    Single ones becoming jealous. 😀
    Nice story.

  2. Rosaliene Bacchus's avatar

    Sounds more like his friends had fallen into a rot and are now envious of his newfound love life.

  3. Rivers Renewed's avatar

    This is excellent.

  4. anne leueen's avatar

    I know it isn’t funny but this story made me smile because it is SO TRUE! That is just what people are like!

    • Mark Tulin's avatar

      You’re right, Anne. I was thinking of two people in particular whose luck had changed, and then victimized by their best friends. 🙂🙂

  5. forresting365's avatar

    I really like Your story….and am head over heels in love with the picture You chose. Brilliant! Thank You, Mark! Cheers!!! 🙂

  6. johnlmalone's avatar

    reminds me of that Skyhooks’ song: ‘All My Friends are Getting Married’ 🙂

  7. Dave Williams's avatar
    Dave Williams

    A sad bunch of friends for Charles, but the story rings with truth.

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