A California Street by Mark Tulin
I had a vivid dream at nine, living by the California coast, walking down a wide street, past palm trees and Spanish-style houses…
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A California Street by Mark Tulin
I had a vivid dream at nine,
living by the California coast,
walking down a wide street,
past palm trees and Spanish-style houses.
I marveled at the warmth of the sun,
the clearness of the turquoise sea
and how beautiful the birds-of-paradise were.
Then I woke from the dream
and walked a broken path to school
down a narrow, tree-less North Philly street
with brick homes and abandoned cars on either side.
The sky was cloudy.
The air was stale.
Only the faint breeze coming from the Delaware
reminded me of the Pacific.


You got to live in California , so your dream came true.
Beautiful poem. The opposites of the dream and reality is very emotive.
Miriam
Yes, it did. It’s been 8 years and I still can’t believe it. Half the time, my head is still back in philly, though.
😊 It seems that we carry many places within us.
Yes, the ones closest to our heart.
So very happy it came true!!! 😃
yes😎🌞🏄🏻♀️
nice contrasts: i like the easy rhythm of this, the ordinariness yet beauty of the language
Thank you, John
Hi mark,
The poetry competition results are now live,
https://penableme.wordpress.com/2020/03/11/the-winner-of-the-poetry-competition-10th-of-march/
Gee, it’s wonderful that you got have your dream realized. I’m glad you’re here! 🙂
Thanks
This is great. I can relate so much!
Thanks, Corrie.