Leaves of Ink: Skateboard Angels
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Skateboard Angels
Mark Tulin
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The sun shines on skateboard angels
where teenagers do figure eights
in oval parks near ocean waves,
sliding along the silver rails
doing backflips and somersaults
over lazy seagulls and narrow walls
while kicking up their spinning boards,
snatching victory in the jaws of disaster.
The faces of the skaters change,
but the sounds of the skatepark remain;
wheels grinding on swooping concrete,
boards colliding in midair,
skaters tumbling from a hard fall,
war stories told to neophytes,
counting bumps and bruises;
immune to it all.
When you’re a young California kid,
your hair’s as yellow as the sun
and your mind knows no fear;
you take chances on the sharp curves
and the edges of the sloping bends,
believing that everything you try
will work out in the end.


great job, as always, creating images in my mind…….
Thank you, wendi. You’re comments are much appreciated. 🙂
you are very welcome, it is always a pleasure.
🙂
A good metaphor for youth! We’ve all experienced it, some with skateboards, some with other means of youthful expression.
Yes, their energy, creativity, and passion. 🙂
Beautifully cheerful!!
Thank you. 🙂
What a wonderful feeling.
Thanks, Bojana.
Great poem! I love the last line…believing everything will work out in the end. That pretty much sums youth up! 🙂
Yes, the optimism of youth.
brilliant, Mark; you nailed it!! I;ve hand copied it into my Notebook; no greater praise …. 🙂
Thanks, John. 🛹🛹
Love the imagery , the energy that you create here Mark.
I can hear the sounds…
Best,
Thanks, Kerry
Great visuals! I can see it in my mind’s eye. Thank you, Mark.
Thanks, Theresa.
Blessings, Mark!!
Much thanks, Nora.