A Jagged Collection – Visual Verse
— visualverse.org/submissions/a-jagged-collection/
A JAGGED COLLECTION
Mark Tulin
Our worst chaos
is a flood of bent arms and legs
that don’t have torsos.
The muted voices in a department store
liquidation are another sign of our economy’s decay.
When we walk through a closed store
without smiling faces or displays,
we soon realize that all the manikins
quietly form in dismembered unity,
a jagged collection of gender-less models
in the abandoned darkness of despair,
secretly having a vigil for the dead
without candles.


Had a chance to read it. Beautiful, Mark.
Your poem creates a vivid image of destruction.
Beautifully written.
miriam
Thank you, Miriam.
excellent! “dismembered unity” is perfect
thank you, Robert. 🙂
Ooh, what a sad picture for the manikins. But beautiful, nonetheless.
🙏🏻
You did a fantastic job with the visual prompt! I am very impressed.
Thanks, Liz. Visual Verse seems to have pictures that resonate with me. 😎
I can see that!