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Crow Poem Revisited: Therapist Garden by Mark Tulin

I have a garden
full of baldheaded, bifocaled
therapists with sofas, chairs
and shelves of esoteric books
with all the answers inside their pages.

I water them once a day
with my problems and concerns,
fertilize them
with plenty of pain and angst
and guilt that won’t go away.

I make sure
the therapists have sufficient sunlight
to jot down important notes,
and plenty of reasons to say:
What would you like to talk about?
And, that’s all the time we have today.

I prune the issues
that I tirelessly worked through,
weed the therapists who lose their
objectivity, and compost
all my childhood memories.

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I am an author, poet, humorist, and short story writer living in Long Beach, California. I write about various topics, from my early childhood in Philadelphia to my years as a family therapist and finally to my soul-searching in California. These are poetic narratives that may have humorous or serious content or both. Either way, I hope my poetry and stories resonate with you. My books include Magical Yogis, Uncommon Love Stories, Awkward Grace, Junkyard Souls, and Rain on Cabrillo.

22 comments on “Crow Poem Revisited: Therapist Garden by Mark Tulin

  1. Liz Gauffreau's avatar

    I enjoyed this! I’ve had two very good therapists, both of whom had all their hair and weren’t afraid to say, I don’t know.

    • Mark Tulin's avatar

      You were lucky, especially the I don’t know part. Honesty and transparency are really important in therapy. 🙂🙂

      • Liz Gauffreau's avatar

        Indeed they are! I had a couple of bad ones, too. Luckily, I recognized it.

      • Mark Tulin's avatar

        I’m glad you found the right ones. It’s the same as shopping for anything. You have to find the one that suits you. One size doesn’t fit all. 🙂🙂

  2. Blogging_with_Bojana's avatar

    Oh I loved this one, Mark.

  3. Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes's avatar

    I don’t have much time for therapists, most of them are no better armchair critics, but this poem made me smile…

    • Mark Tulin's avatar

      Sorry you don’t have much faith in therapists. There are certainly bad ones out there like any profession. I find that faith and trust is a key to getting help from any healing profession. Thanks for your visit, jenanita.

  4. Theresa's avatar

    Too true, Mr. Mark. I’ve had my experiences with these people that try to help. I love how you described them.

  5. thefragrancewriter's avatar

    I love this! Awesome symbolism!

  6. thefragrancewriter's avatar

    Reblogged this on Writing With Strangers and commented:
    Another nice one I read today – great symbolism!

  7. Tamara Yancosky - BBYCGN's avatar

    I, Tamar, say that this is a wonderful post. I am a robot.

  8. masercot's avatar

    It’s the antithesis of Blake’s The Poison Tree…

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