8 thoughts on “Flash Fiction Link: The Promise

      1. It probably will and by experience I can tell you that when a parent you don’t get along passes away is more tormenting then loosing the one you deeply loved because your feelings are so mixed and messy and so are you totally messed up

      2. Or even if we don’t want is the judging and the awkward feeling of not feeling what you are supposed to according with common sense.At my father funeral I felt like I was witnessing something as a third person ,from outside myself.It was strange and left me with pain and bitterness and confusion

  1. I really like this piece! The way you suck us into the situation in just one line, then I am so THERE with this guy, who is trying NOT to be his father in the ways that were no good- then the zinger in the end. Nicely done.

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