Creative Writing – THE CREATIVITY WEBZINE
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Please note: It was brought to my attention that the link to this story doesn’t work. My story must be floating somewhere out in cyberspace, along with this telephone booth.
Crow On The Wire 
A very suspenseful ending!
Thank you.
A gripping tale. Well developed. Alan has just cause to be terrified of his future.
Yes, he does. Having a baby when you’re not expecting it is surreal and overwhelming. 😟
The ending took me by surprise–but upon reflection, it was fitting. Such fear and uncertainty in that situation, on both ends of the telephone.
Totally life changing.
I know whereof you speak.
🙂
Haunting and beautifully written.
Thank you. 🙏🏻
Oh, man…that’s no fair! You left it a cliffhanger. What happed to them? Why did Sara hang up? Did he ever go back and find out? How heartbreaking!
What do you think happened? 😎